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Have You Ever...

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Have you ever watched someone's heart break?
Have you ever seen someone cut themselves open?
Have you ever watched as they popped those pills?
Have you ever seen them go cold?...

Have you ever given them a compliment?
Have you ever said they're pretty?
Have you ever told them thank you?
Have you ever said that you love them?...

Have you ever heard their screams of pain?
Have you ever heard them cry?
Have you ever heard them beg for their life to end?
Have you ever heard them say they still love you?...

Have you ever felt that gripping pain?
Have you ever felt that scream trying to wriggle out?
Have you ever felt that you were just another part of the walls around you?
Have you ever felt the need to die?...

Have you ever tasted your own blood?
Have you ever tasted that bitter pill?
Have you ever tasted that blade in your mouth?
Have you ever tasted your own death?...

Have you ever smelled their blood?
Have you ever smelled their fear right before the end?
Have you ever smelled their tears?
Have you ever smelled... Death?...

A song about the suicidal and the one left behind using the five senses.
Something I had rolling around my head and typed up in ten minuets, so it probably isn't that good... But would you guys mind telling me what you think? It would be much appreciated! :D
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teratabitha's avatar
this is amazing, unbelievable even, wow... I love it :w00t!: